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JST Said,
September 2nd, 2008 @5:56 am  

Wow … great idea, and so romantic!!

But I think i see your problem. You’re a double hemisphere thinker kind of guy. Just shut off the side that gets into all that tecky stuff and you’ll be fine. Just like you did on the Rashkind video.

Jill

BTW, love the site. So much better than 90% of the other blogs out there. Can’t believe this is just the beta version!!! Looking forward to more.

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NRF Said,
September 2nd, 2008 @11:07 am  

I hate to be practical especially when it comes to romance, but I’d have to say that there are several factors that would likely affect the outcome. The one that comes to mind first is the age at which you meet the “object of your affection.” People can change drastically from their early twenties to their mid-thirties, and then some people don’t change much at all. Let’s say two people meet early in their college careers and have a strong connection but don’t pursue the relationship past college. One part of the couple has a change of ideals (whether religious, political or social) by their early thirties. The other person cannot expect that there would be much left of that “connection” ten years down the road. The person that changed might not be able to even imagine what his/her life would have been like if he/she had taken the alternate path. And I’m not sure whether the “box” should ever be opened. Some things are best left to the imagination.

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Brian J OMalley Said,
September 2nd, 2008 @5:55 pm  

NRF,

That’s a very good point. I know I’m not the same person I was 15 years ago, and change is the only constant in life. But, I think I’m much close to who I always wanted to be. If both parties progressed in the same direction, couldn’t the same attraction be there as before and possibly even stronger? I would think so.

On the other hand, if either of the parties went in the other direction, I think you’re correct. It wouldn’t work at all.

Let’s assume for the discussion both parties actually improved and moved closer to the core part of their personalities that made for the attraction in the first place.

Are you saying you wouldn’t be curious in either case? :)

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ETB Said,
September 11th, 2008 @12:48 pm  

I say open the box! Or are you satisfied by living with your fantasies of what a relationship might be. Actually, it’s all probably so perfect in one’s imagination now, isn’t it. Perhaps the relationship in reality may not meet your expectations, especially if you have had awhile to create them. If you choose to open that box, you must be prepared for possible rejection. However, if you don’t open it, you will never know the beauty of a love that may still exist for the two of you. Take a chance, but don’t let the fear of unmet expectations consume you. How does one “open the box”? Email or telephone works well.
By the way, love the blog and your writing. Keep it up!

ETB

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Brian J OMalley Said,
September 11th, 2008 @8:22 pm  

ETB,

Thanks for the comment. However, I do have to mention that this is a fictional piece only based on an idea that there may be connections among us all that are somehow very special.

You underline a previous comment that basically maps out the basis for the dramatic tension for the story. Have things changed? Are the two fictional characters still connected? Has one improved and the other degraded? Have both characters compensated for their loss in ways that betray what they once had? Has the environment overcome the physics (per se) of their connection?

You have me going in the right direction. Thank you for that. And you’re absolutely right that there are only two choices here, but which will our protagonist choose — or is there possibly a third way?

My only argument with your comment is that emailing or phoning a person doesn’t make for great fiction. Practical in the real world, yes, but this is not the real world. I mean seriously, can you imagine Stanley emailing Stella in A Streetcar Named Desire?

How would that go exactly? Stella!! Stella :<

We’re on the right track though. I just wish someone knew that Indian folk story. It captured the essence of the idea perfectly. If anyone does, please let me know.

Thanks a lot ETB. You can’t imagine how much you’ve helped me.

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NRF Said,
September 11th, 2008 @8:56 pm  

Hey Brian,

If I were to assume that both parties progressed in the same direction and both were not in committed relationships, then I would say of course take the chance. It would be very interesting.

And I think I know someone who may know about the Indian folklore. :)

-Nadine

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Brian J OMalley Said,
September 11th, 2008 @9:23 pm  

Nadine,

Well said, but wouldn’t it help the dramatic tension of this entirely fictional story if one of them was in a “committed” relationship to which s/he wasn’t particularly committed to — and perhaps never was?

And maybe, just maybe, that’s how our protagonist finds her again in the first place? And maybe the protagonist doesn’t care anymore.

Just shooting out ideas. I wish the international audience would chime in here a bit. France? Netherlands? India? Columbia? Britain? South Africa? Australia? Canada? Where are you people? Say something, please.

Oh, Nadia, I totally get the last line. How could I forget those great friends?

Brian

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Jim in eP Said,
September 11th, 2008 @9:45 pm  

I hate to tell you people this but this is all a load of crap.

You meet a girl when she yound and pretty and then she turns out to be something completely different than what you thought after she pops out like 3 kids. and where do you do now?

You don’t need any fnacy tension. Its part of life.

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Irvine Lady Said,
September 11th, 2008 @10:00 pm  

Jims comments aside … there’s a valid point here.

A man who waits for a woman for years and then finds her and still has the same connetion through some metaphysical force?

Come on.

This man doesn’t exist anywhere on the planet. Trust me.

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Oh Canada!!! Said,
September 11th, 2008 @10:09 pm  

You asked for Canadians. Here you are.

Regarding the prevous comment by the lady in Irvine, what if … just what if … there were such a man?

Can you honestly say that’s not exactly what your looking for?

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The Brits are here Said,
September 11th, 2008 @10:15 pm  

And what then? We all live happily under London bridge? Wouldn’t that be lovely?

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NRF Said,
September 12th, 2008 @4:29 pm  

Wow! Amazing responses!

Jim, you sound reaaaaaaaaaaallllly interesting.

Irvine Lady, I really think he might exist somewhere. Trust me, he’s out there.

Oh Canada, of course that’s what we’re all looking for…unless we’ve already found it.

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Brian J OMalley Said,
September 12th, 2008 @6:32 pm  

NRF,

Yeah, they’re a good group. But here’s the thing, after I post my new stories tomorrow (all blog-keeping kind of stuff), the cat goes into the archive. I think I’ve found a way to revive her though.

The thing is, now we need to work on the storyline. We’ve figured out the tension, now how do these two find each other again, and what happens when they do?

If we pull this off, I’m even willing to share the byline if the publisher allows it. Or maybe we publish it as an e-short story?

I’m looking for storylines folks. Ummm … Jim, maybe a little bit, you know, more optimistic if you can.

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Brian J OMalley Said,
October 10th, 2008 @11:23 am  

For those of you subscribing to the feed for this story, and there are many, many of you, I’ve decided to start writing this story this weekend. My progress will be documented in a password-protected page that will require registratioin to see.

I’m going to Lititz this weekend to do a story about the Chocolate Walk for charity there. I’ve decided to make the town the backdrop for the story.

Subscribers to the password-protected page will be able to contribute to the story. It should be a lot of fun for everyone.

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